What do you think of my story so far (its copywrited btw)?

Sorry but the whole thing is very cliche. Girl starts at a new school? Check. Waking up to the sound of an alarm clock? Check. Seeing her reflection in a mirror? Check. All those things have been overdone. Plus you change tense a lot, especially in the beginning with 'My Mom is' being present tense and then "I couldn't wait" being past. You have some spelling errors too like 'I still barely knew' not new. You don't need the commas there either. My suggestion is to find a way to hook the reader, give it a new twist and take it from there. Work on spelling and grammar and bring it back. Keep working on it, make it more unique and you'll be on your way. Good luck!